Short story: dark, disturbing, revenge
That last line? What a laugh to leave us on. Beautiful, brutal work.
As always, thank you so much (fighting my inner demons who want to end this comment with a poop emoji)
Damn! This was intense and very scroll worthy. I needed to know what was causing him to suffer and a super power?!! Damn. Good stuff!!
Thank you for giving it a read! One of my favorites but kinda got buried.
Well someday I hope in blossoms above the ground.
Wild man… not sure if I’m glad I saved this for later or not haha. Such thrilling writing though 👌
Thank you! I know it's hard to get around to the longer pieces so I appreciate the read!
Definitely an uncomfortable read! Vivid, potent writing!
Thank you! And thank you for powering through it :)
Loved it!
Thank you!!
You write brilliantly, the amazing and fantastic scenes make this story exciting, yet scary.
Ahhh thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I definitely wanted it to be an uncomfortable read.
Amazing what a way to go I know a few politicians I would wish this on
Thank you! And my thoughts exactly.
This was the funniest concept — a mind control, shit your pants revenge scene! I laughed pretty hard a few times there. The way you described everything is gold! Or i should say brown…!
Ha! Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad it brought you some laughs. The worst/best superpower to have lol.
Def! Haha
That last line? What a laugh to leave us on. Beautiful, brutal work.
As always, thank you so much (fighting my inner demons who want to end this comment with a poop emoji)
Damn! This was intense and very scroll worthy. I needed to know what was causing him to suffer and a super power?!! Damn. Good stuff!!
Thank you for giving it a read! One of my favorites but kinda got buried.
Well someday I hope in blossoms above the ground.
Wild man… not sure if I’m glad I saved this for later or not haha. Such thrilling writing though 👌
Thank you! I know it's hard to get around to the longer pieces so I appreciate the read!
Definitely an uncomfortable read! Vivid, potent writing!
Thank you! And thank you for powering through it :)
Loved it!
Thank you!!
You write brilliantly, the amazing and fantastic scenes make this story exciting, yet scary.
Ahhh thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I definitely wanted it to be an uncomfortable read.
Amazing what a way to go I know a few politicians I would wish this on
Thank you! And my thoughts exactly.
This was the funniest concept — a mind control, shit your pants revenge scene! I laughed pretty hard a few times there. The way you described everything is gold! Or i should say brown…!
Ha! Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad it brought you some laughs. The worst/best superpower to have lol.
Def! Haha