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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Oh man! I was excited to read this all weekend! Now Iโ€™m distraught I have to wait again ๐Ÿ˜….

So cool! Love the way you are setting the scene, itโ€™s so eerie but vibrant too..

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you!! I'm on a roll so maybe part 4 will be posted soon!

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Molly's avatar

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I simply cannot say enough good things about this story. It's raw, emotional, and ethereal in every sense.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you so much for taking the time to read all these! I am so grateful for your time and input. Glad you are loving it! Part 4 soon!

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Ava's avatar

Eyes of opal! Beautifully done. This story is absolutely killer. I still stand by Catriz y Elvis forever ๐Ÿ–ค

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you!! Yes we are getting to the lore! Catriz and Elvis will not let you down!

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Offscreenshaman's avatar

Not ceremony. Survival, dressed in ash and marrow. The body remembers what the church tried to erase. Spellbound.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Hell yes. Thank you!

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samara's avatar

wow, yes, vivid and visceral. Enjoying Brujas immensely as it emerges bit by magical bit

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you!! I really wanted to spend time on this ritual and make it an experience.

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samara's avatar

Achieved! I was right there in the circle with them

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R. M. Greta's avatar

I'm glad to hear that! I've read over it so many times I can't even tell what it says anymore

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Bea's avatar

This is beautiful and heartbreaking and breathtaking in its sacred intensity ๐Ÿ–ค honored to bare witness, because thatโ€™s what it feels like Iโ€™m doing here.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you, as always ๐Ÿค๐Ÿค

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