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Molly's avatar

I'm so invested!!! The goose bumps are actually real. You've done such an amazing job at capturing a simmering rage. Also, it's amazing how delicate you're able to be while amping up the tension.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you! I can't read this part without crying, honestly.

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

I'm enthralled. Late, but ready for what's next.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

I appreciate the read! Just in time.

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Bea's avatar

Magnificent 🖤 The rage of betrayal, the grief of loss, the quiet fear of uncertainty. Beautifully done my friend.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you so much 🤍🤍 it's been healing.

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

The balance between tension and deep emotion is so beautiful, especially with your somewhat direct style digging right for the bones. I’m going to be uneasy waiting for the next part.. awesome R!

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Ahhhh thank you!! I'm so glad that all comes through. I live for discomfort!

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Ava's avatar

This is fantastic, and something close to my heart. Can't wait for the next part. Thank you 🖤

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you! This whole story has so much of myself in it down to the smallest details. I appreciate it.

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Offscreenshaman's avatar

So much of this story unfolds in what’s unsaid. That restraint, that trust in the reader’s heart to fill in the dark, takes real mastery.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

I'm taking this straight to my heart. Thank you.

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Laura B's avatar

I want to be in the room with these ladies. I'm invested.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

I'm writing the heroes and community I always needed 🤍 thanks for reading

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Laura B's avatar

That's really beautiful.

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MA Knight's avatar

Well now I’m hooked. Justice must be done.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Hell yes!!

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Luis Rosa's avatar

I just love the description of details around the house. Great dialogues, too—I dig the Spanish bits.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thank you! I struggle the most with those two types of writing so I appreciate it!

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