What a delightfully dusty and sharp-edged story. Like a rattlesnake with a wink. You’ve captured that shimmer between threat and belonging beautifully. It’s as if the desert itself is leaning in to eavesdrop. Can hardly wait to see what is next.
Hot diggity indeed! Friday just got a lot more interesting. Can’t wait to see where you take us next. I’ve got a feeling the desert still has a few secrets up its sleeve. Keep ‘em coming!
I love how poetic your style is! "Old hinges whined and the crash of the latch on the fence post sounded as the gate closed behind her and she called out." This line is so melodic to me. The overall tension of the piece is crafted beautifully as well. I'm excited to catch up 😊
Ahhh thank you! I do love this line too. It seemed so important to me to have that sound in there. It's kind of a cherished sound even if it's jarring.
This is rad! I’m super excited to see where this goes. Loving the vibe of it all.. can already tell it’s going to make a rad graphic novel or film when you’re famous..
What a delightfully dusty and sharp-edged story. Like a rattlesnake with a wink. You’ve captured that shimmer between threat and belonging beautifully. It’s as if the desert itself is leaning in to eavesdrop. Can hardly wait to see what is next.
Hot diggity! Thank you! I'm so glad all that came through for you. Part 2 will be out on Friday! I appreciate the read.
Hot diggity indeed! Friday just got a lot more interesting. Can’t wait to see where you take us next. I’ve got a feeling the desert still has a few secrets up its sleeve. Keep ‘em coming!
Yess many secrets. Thank you so much.
This is a great start! I love Elvis! First time I’ve ever said that lol but the goat has my heart. I can’t wait to see how this unfolds!
Haha the goat is everything in this story. Truly the only Elvis I'll ever love.
I love how poetic your style is! "Old hinges whined and the crash of the latch on the fence post sounded as the gate closed behind her and she called out." This line is so melodic to me. The overall tension of the piece is crafted beautifully as well. I'm excited to catch up 😊
Ahhh thank you! I do love this line too. It seemed so important to me to have that sound in there. It's kind of a cherished sound even if it's jarring.
Yes, I can hear the exact sound clearly in my mind when I read this. Absolutely brilliant!
A woman and her goat staring st the plume of a story coming ever closer to them kn a single lonely road . . . Its so good.
Ahhh thank you so much! Stay tuned! It gets gnarly.
Esto está cabrón. Had me from the first line.. ¿Y Catriz y Elvis? Descalza al infierno con ellos 🖤
Yes!!! 🤍🤍🤍 Thank you so much! I needed a Catriz in my life. And Elvis! There's a lot in store for Elvis.
The atmosphere, the tension... Terrific.
Ahhh thank you. I hope you'll stay tuned for part 2!
This is killer. I’m in love with the vibes here. So fucking dope.
Yes! Thank you!!
This is rad! I’m super excited to see where this goes. Loving the vibe of it all.. can already tell it’s going to make a rad graphic novel or film when you’re famous..
Ahhh thank you. Graphic novel would be the best ever.
Although I already feel famous with everyone's kind words 🤍
Heat-warped, dust-heavy, and full of pause.
Waiting, quietly, for the next plume of dust.
I’m very attached to Elvis the goat
Elvis is the best character by far.