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Allen Kwon's avatar

There’s so much unspoken history here. You’ve layered love, regret, betrayal, and control into a single encounter. Masterful tension.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Oh my goodness. Thank you. I like to leave things open to interpretation so I'm glad it spoke these things to you.

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Like Val, I keep getting pulled in.

Feedback: I can’t always discern who’s talking, or if some of the quotes are internal thoughts or spoken aloud. It adds to the overall mystery and dream like nature of the story, though.

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Thanks so much for reading! and for the feedback. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

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