Micro-fiction: I see it coming. Do you?
(Nods in solemn recognition)
God I hope the good ones were penguins..
My heart shattered at the truth in the conclusion.
Just based off my last post where so many people said “I can see this happening” 😞
🤬
that last paragraph…holy moly. this was a lovely and horrific ride from start to finish in the best way
Thank you so much! I always loved fables for their detached horror.
Cliff top birds are stupid and short sighted. They actively ignore that everyone is a bird. Great parable.
Thank you. And you are correct.
Love me some parables. Awesome stuff
Thank you! I feel like you can drag anyone you want in a parable hahah
what a parable for our days. well done RMG. you're a veritable well spring of written goodness!
Thank you so much, Nick! “Veritable well spring of written goodness" just made my day.
It will only come for me? My God. (5AM first reading, blurry eyes)
Hitchcock would be proud.
we're burning witches too
…
It matters what you say, it matters what you do
Now we're fighting in our hearts
Fighting in the streets
war is stupid
and people are stupid
And love means nothing
The last line is fucking dynamite! Drop the mic.
Thank you, Nick! I love the little paths that writing leads us on.
It is the best.
Potent.
Poignant parallel, perfect devastation with the ending on both feelings and phrasing
(Feel like this comment has an awkward alliteration but it says what I felt in the moment 😅)
Ugh the last line though, so so biting but lovely wording
Thank you! I liked the image of the wave trying to eat the sky.
(Nods in solemn recognition)
God I hope the good ones were penguins..
My heart shattered at the truth in the conclusion.
Just based off my last post where so many people said “I can see this happening” 😞
🤬
that last paragraph…holy moly. this was a lovely and horrific ride from start to finish in the best way
Thank you so much! I always loved fables for their detached horror.
Cliff top birds are stupid and short sighted. They actively ignore that everyone is a bird. Great parable.
Thank you. And you are correct.
Love me some parables. Awesome stuff
Thank you! I feel like you can drag anyone you want in a parable hahah
what a parable for our days. well done RMG. you're a veritable well spring of written goodness!
Thank you so much, Nick! “Veritable well spring of written goodness" just made my day.
It will only come for me? My God. (5AM first reading, blurry eyes)
Hitchcock would be proud.
we're burning witches too
…
It matters what you say, it matters what you do
Now we're fighting in our hearts
Fighting in the streets
…
war is stupid
and people are stupid
And love means nothing
The last line is fucking dynamite! Drop the mic.
Thank you, Nick! I love the little paths that writing leads us on.
It is the best.
Potent.
Poignant parallel, perfect devastation with the ending on both feelings and phrasing
(Feel like this comment has an awkward alliteration but it says what I felt in the moment 😅)
Ugh the last line though, so so biting but lovely wording
Thank you! I liked the image of the wave trying to eat the sky.