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AD Powers's avatar

HALL DECKER MENTIONED RAHHHHHHH

RM Greta's avatar

hahah I've been SO EXCITED for you to see how I used the name :)

AD Powers's avatar

Luke is the horseman of the sassy man apocalypse

RM Greta's avatar

so sassy, so sensitive.

AD Powers's avatar

I’m so invested in this now 😭😭

RM Greta's avatar

I'm going to thrive off of your comments for weeks, months maybe <3

AD Powers's avatar

GOOD!

Mac Sitko's avatar

This chapter had me laughing. That final scene felt like a punch to the gut in the best possible way.

RM Greta's avatar

Haha there were some silly shenanigans for sure! Thanks for tuning in! I appreciate it, given the genre 😆 Adam had to come back to ruin things…

Ed the Editor's avatar

This was more nauseatingly cozy that I could expect. What’s more dire than someone taking over your favorite recipe?

Great job on cozy holiday tropes. Will they all die horrible deaths in part 3? Staying tuned to find out.

RM Greta's avatar

haha you will get answers in part 3, I promise. The tropes…god the tropes. I was very glad to cut a few scenes out this chapter. enough is enough!

Thanks for tuning in :)

MA Knight's avatar

WHAT WHAT WHAT ADAM IS BACK WHAT A SLIMEY MOFO

RM Greta's avatar

oh so you’re not Team Adam!?!?! hahaha I am so glad you are entertained by this <3

MA Knight's avatar

NO I AM NOT TEAM ADAM

RM Greta's avatar

😂😂😂

Stephen Duffy's avatar

I feel like she's the problem, more so than him. Also, the scene of them laughing outside the church was fucking weird! 😂❤️

RM Greta's avatar

She's a little bit the problem. He's not a bad guy.

Church laughing was cringey and awkward for sure. Kind of like… okayyy it's not that funny you guys.

Stephen Duffy's avatar

It’s only funny if you secretly wanna bang each other.

RM Greta's avatar

😂 I'm embarrassed for them.

Jay Wilcox's avatar

"Hall Decker..." hahaha

RM Greta's avatar

😅 Very brilliant suggestion from AD Powers. Thanks for reading!

Rosie B's avatar

Ahh, feelings are starting to catch! The church scene was hilarious.

RM Greta's avatar

Haha yes! It's happening... I hope you enjoy part 3! Thank you for checking back in 🤍

Sapna's avatar

Ooooh. This is such a treat.

RM Greta's avatar

Thank you!! It's been fun :)

Solace Solnova's avatar

Their inner child’s like each other lol they both childish but I love it lol the church scene was so funny

RM Greta's avatar

They’re both obnoxious! Church part was my fave. Thank you!

✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

ohhh i love how funny this is?! little quips and funny inner monologue are quickly becoming a soft spot for me and this definitely hits the mark. 🖤

RM Greta's avatar

haha the quips and inner monologue are something i disdain entirely about this genre but I am going all in! Thank you so much for taking the time for this!

✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

i think thats why im digging it 😂 its so outside the realm of what i think youd ever write that its perfect bc youre executing it so well

RM Greta's avatar

well it is becoming the bane of my existence so I greatly appreciate this 😂

Alex Jenkin's avatar

I love that you turned you talent for vivid description towards chip choking with great effect 😂

RM Greta's avatar

Haha thank you so much! Does that count as body horror? I think so!

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Haha definitely!

Nav Rao's avatar

I hate that I’m starting to like Luke btw

RM Greta's avatar

Muahahah! It's working!! He's not so bad is he?? He's romantic. He's tender. He's sensitive 🥹

Nav Rao's avatar

Ok this is turning into something akin to one of those slice of life anime I watch. Not the pervy stuff. Ok the pervy stuff.

RM Greta's avatar

I had to Google that but I love it! Wish this story had more pervy stuff.

Nav Rao's avatar

I've booked some time in my calendar for today to read this

RM Greta's avatar

Ohhh! Yes! I can’t wait for your feedback. I’m still laughing occasionally about “smug fuck” from the first part.

Bea's avatar

This was both a satisfying and irritating read. Well done, as always. 😘

RM Greta's avatar

Ooh thank you Bea! 🤍 I so appreciate your time!

Buzz Kantwrite's avatar

Great job. Looking forward to part 3.

RM Greta's avatar

I really can’t thank you enough. Part 3 will not disappoint; I pledge my life on it.