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Ethan H.'s avatar

wowee the dreaded direction you are taking this one. you’re an incredible captain of this story’s ship!

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RM Greta's avatar

I really appreciate that! I have been so stuck in this story that Ive wondered what I'm even doing haha. You know when you stare at something for so long you can't tell what it is anymore?

Also it's a challenge for myself and those end up sometimes feeling aimless.

Anyway THANK YOU!

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Buzz Kantwrite's avatar

Getting cookie crumbs in her bed is not going to improve her situation.

Eager to see where this goes (spoilers: she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning and being stabbed with cookie crumbs, sharp as shards of glass).

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RM Greta's avatar

They're not kidding when they say everything is scarier in Australia. What kind of cookies are you all making there!?!?

Thanks for reading 😊

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Buzz Kantwrite's avatar

we call them prison cookies. Anyone gives us side eye we snap the cookie in half and use it as a shiv.

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RM Greta's avatar

I see now why you lean heavily on the humor. We all find ways to cope … I'm praying for your country.

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Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Oh fuck I’m so excited to see what happens here

Also I love cats with pun names 💕

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RM Greta's avatar

Ahhh! Thanks ☺️ I'm glad the suspense is working. It's hard to do action horror vs dread horror.

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MA Knight's avatar

The time for violence is nigh

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RM Greta's avatar
5dEdited

I promise it will be satisfying. Thank you for reading 🤍

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✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

omg i just clicked to read this SO FAST. im behind on other things but i wanna read this so bad its happening RIGHT MEOW!

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RM Greta's avatar

You are the best 🤍 I look forward to seeing what you think EVERY TIME! i appreciate the time you take.

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✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

i feel the same way about you, i value your opinion so much on my writing! and i admire your work sooo much! such a good job!

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RM Greta's avatar

🤍🤍🤍 😭 needed this today!! I'm such a fan!

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✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

IM such a fan 💜💜💜

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Rosie B's avatar

The suspense is amazing! Can’t wait to see where this goes. So real and terrifying!

Also really sad about the dropped Thai food…

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RM Greta's avatar

Thank you so much, Rosie! The Thai food is the saddest part SO FAR.

I'm glad it's working! It's a new style for me.

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C. Rae Lee's avatar

Just binge read this whole series from TCC part 1 to the blood and sin continuation. Not usually a romance reader - loved the twist the series took. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out!

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RM Greta's avatar

Ahh thank you! I appreciate the time you took to read it all. The final installment arrives soon!

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C. Rae Lee's avatar

Can’t wait!

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Adriane Lord's avatar

Wooo....sorry I totally just noticed that this was out. Can't wait for the next installment!

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RM Greta's avatar

Oooh thanks for reading! Any time is good! 😊 Next one should be action-packed!

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Jared Michael's avatar

Nice!😊

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RM Greta's avatar

Yaaaaah Jared's here! Thanks!!

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Rad! This is such a fun dark turn. Great job building suspense and with the short scene changes. Makes it exciting to read 🤘

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RM Greta's avatar

OOh that’s such good feedback thank you. I was unsure about the scene changes since I’m not trying to write a whole ass book about this, i just want a good slasher!

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Yeah it works really well. Keeping it to clear vivid moments and then letting some evil linger in the dark between..

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RM Greta's avatar

Sweet. It’s a new pace/type of horror for me so I’m glad to hear that’s working. I do want it to feel vivid, not too deep, and heavy on the scares. Kind of like Scream. A little campy. Thanks again!

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Ed the Editor's avatar

I don’t like this dread. 😰

😂

All alone. Creeper. Can’t be good.

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RM Greta's avatar

What’s one thing introverts hate? People knocking on doors and calling instead of texting haha. Glad it’s so dread-filled.

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Haha. Yes. I hate getting phone calls and impromptu visits. Friend or foe. Definitely horror material.

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Oh, and the cover. Creepy AF!

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Walt Shuler's avatar

Damn, the tension in this was excellent! And I'm sooo here for it when she starts beating the shit out of her stalker.

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RM Greta's avatar

I'm glad to hear that. I've said this already but this is a new type of horror for me and I've been struggling with too little or too much build up.

Thanks, Walt! It'll be a good showdown!

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Lee Summers's avatar

Not the Thai food! I’m sat for this!

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RM Greta's avatar

Haha! I thought more people were going to be upset about that! I was!

Thanks for tuning in 🤍

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Nav Rao's avatar

Sadly this probably mirrors someone’s life right now. Your writing has made me anxious and irate. Damn you’re good!

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RM Greta's avatar

I have been looking forward to seeing what you thought of it so far! I'm glad you "enjoyed" it!

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Nav Rao's avatar

Did this happen to you by any chance?

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RM Greta's avatar

Ooh no thankfully not! No one's been weird about writing romance, if that's what you mean.

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Nav Rao's avatar

Ah I mean the intolerance that veered into creepy stalking behaviour

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✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

oooh this is everything. the dread towards the end was top tier! so excited for the rest!

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RM Greta's avatar

yess thank you!! I’m glad it came through. It’s a different type of “horror” set up for me. Thank youuuu for reading 🤍

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✨🖤morningstar🖤✨'s avatar

its sooo good ugh

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