The moment after Catriz called to Elvis for help, the part starting with "A splintering crash", literally gave me goosebumps. And Catriz's interjections, "Hijole, cabrona! I'm only 40!" and ending with "Puta" both made me laugh. I love how you've built everyone's character, but especially Catriz and Elvis. So good!
That part gave me goosebumps too as I wrote and edited and visualized it. I'm glad it did for you too!
The “cabrona" part was so amusing to me as well. I had it written weeks before the rest of the scene came together. It has a special place in my heart.
Woah! So exciting! Been hanging to read this for days 😅
Loving the developments in the story and the writing. So many lovely sentences that are concise but rich at the same time even just little ones like the cigarettes being lit then extinguished..
Not sure if I want Catriz to adopt me or teach me how to fight demons with a shotgun and a goat. Maybe both.
Both for sure.
Elvis is the GOAT (in more ways than one)!
Seriously, though, I can feel the heat coming off this. Well done.
Thank you! It was a huge mental struggle to write action scenes. I hope you like the rest!
Trust me, I grapple with action scenes myself! They (perhaps ironically) feel slower to write than more "boring" scenes
Yes! Indeed. Give me feelings or tense pauses and it's way easier.
Elvis is everything! I
I agree! Thank you 🤍
Elvis’s reveal was fucking epic. You’re actually writing magic. I am mesmerized.
Yessss thank you! I've been so insecure about this chapter. Thank you for the support 😭💔
This chapter, and series, is fantastic. Thank you for writing and sharing!
😭🤍🤍🤍
F**k me. I need Elvis in my life. THAT SCENE. Aaaaaaghhhhhhh 🫥🫥🫥
I spent like two weeks on four paragraphs lol. I'm glad the intensity came through!
Elvis is the goat of all goats for sure.
Hahaha glad you did
…that’s some goat.
Indeed!
This was wild! 🤣🔥🐐 Loved it.
surprise! hah. Thanks for reading <3
First I was like, 🪟👩🏽🐐👩🏾, aw cute. Then I was like, 🐐🦅, get ‘em Elvis.
What the hell is Elvis?
Haha maybe you'll find out… thanks for reading! Elvis is the best
Hahah oh my god. This did not go the direction I expected at all. Excellent.
Thank you!!!! A little surprise for sure 😊
The moment after Catriz called to Elvis for help, the part starting with "A splintering crash", literally gave me goosebumps. And Catriz's interjections, "Hijole, cabrona! I'm only 40!" and ending with "Puta" both made me laugh. I love how you've built everyone's character, but especially Catriz and Elvis. So good!
That part gave me goosebumps too as I wrote and edited and visualized it. I'm glad it did for you too!
The “cabrona" part was so amusing to me as well. I had it written weeks before the rest of the scene came together. It has a special place in my heart.
Woah! So exciting! Been hanging to read this for days 😅
Loving the developments in the story and the writing. So many lovely sentences that are concise but rich at the same time even just little ones like the cigarettes being lit then extinguished..
I want an Elvia poster for home now.
Thank you! Breaking a mental sweat over here trying to portray action scenes.
I'll work on a poster for you 😆
Haha yeah that is tricky! Nailed it on my end..
Don’t get my hopes up! 😭
Elvis is one cool goat. I enjoyed your tale
Thank you!
excellent!
elvis!!!!!!!!!!!!
🤍🤍🐐 thank you!!